Murder

Murder

A Poem by SimplyDisastrous
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Love kills.

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Murder

 

Blood seeping to the floor,

Your eyes are cutting me to the core

The smell of death is in the air

Just the sight of you seems too much to bear

You say goodbye with a kiss upon thy cheek

I don't think I've ever felt so weak.

I’m slipping fast now, almost gone

It brings such sadness to know that I’ll never see another dawn.

 




 

 

© 2010 SimplyDisastrous


Author's Note

SimplyDisastrous
Just so you know, I always capitalize the start of every line in my poems. Well, Microsoft Word does it but I don't change it. I like it that way. Hope you like it. Tell me what you were thinking when you read this.

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I like the shortness of the poem, and the lines "You say goodbye with a kiss upon thy cheek, I don't think I've ever felt so weak" are genius. Overall this is a great poem. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


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SimplyDisastrous
SimplyDisastrous

Hartford, CT



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Hey. I used to be on here alot when I was 15. Now, not so much. I'm 18 now and I'm not nearly as depressing as I used to be, but still depressing enough. Message me and feel free to read my old poems... more..

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