Childhood

I wish I could go back to

The time when boys had

Cooties, when I was unable

To write on the lines, the time

When everything was colorful

And right in the world and the

Birds were singing. I wish I could

Go back to childhood.

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

I agree, completely. I think it was a good choice to make the word "childhood" a rainbow. It emphasizes the effects of the innocence of childhood.

[closed]

It was so simple but gave so much. :) and it's true...

[SamBug]

Agreed. Childhood was some of the best years of my life. When you were a child, everything was simple and fun and exciting and amazing. So I can relate to this poem. Great job!

[Meadow Rayne]

too cute. I miss being a child.

[EverEmma]

Quite wonderful. I found myself longing to be a child again. I love your stiff Kristen Wallen. Very very good.


-EverEmma

[Legion]

Me too. Most of it anyway. Although, I don't remember having cooties.

[Alex Thomas]

Nice rhyme scheme. I like the colors at the end. Such a true message. We all long for the innocence and wonder of childhood. But somehow, we're better off with the knowledge. Also ironic because as children all we want is to be adults.