I hate her

I hate her

She’s ugly

And mean

Obsessive

Obnoxious

I’m not the

Only one

Others despise

Her, too

They say

She’s a b***h

They give

Her bad looks

They talk about

Her behind her back

They make fun of

Of her to her face

She’s used

To be abused

She’s a lonely

Soul with no life

Nothing to do

Nothing to look

Forward to

In life

No one she

Can really

Depend on

For help

All of the

People she

Loved the

Most left

Her long ago

No one wants

To  stick around

Her, she’s too

Pathetic for

Their taste

I know because

That girl

Is me.

Reviews

[Kelly Taylor]

This is incredibly relatable; I know I've felt like this before. I gotta say, when I was first reading this poem I wasn't expecting the last few lines, but it definitely gives meaning to the poem as a whole. The setup and layout with the short lines creates suspense. As always, awesome job. :D

[FocusedAmnesia]

I love the twist at the end. The piece was powerful, and the short lines added to that effect. Great read.

[Jennifer Neuman]

I love the feeling in this poem and how in the beginning you are expected to say something different entirely. completely relatable and i definately look forward to reading more (which im going to do right now)

[J.Black]

Everyones had that moment in life where they've hated themselves. I wasn't exactly thinking it was going to end that way which was an amazing twist. Deep write.