I spy

I spy

A Poem by SimplyDisastrous

As I try to clean up my mother's garden

I spy:

2 novels (read)

4 red roses (undead)

A single roll of thread

 5 batteries (dead)

A weeping daisy on the edge

And a bit of some very depressed hedge .

All things my mother would hate to find in her beloved garden.

© 2010 SimplyDisastrous


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this is such an interesting form and one i rarely see. oh and i love the end rhyme!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Indeed. I wonder why those things were in her garden. I believe, myself, that everything happens for a reason.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is wonderful, love the flow and color scheme.


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SimplyDisastrous
SimplyDisastrous

Hartford, CT



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Hey. I used to be on here alot when I was 15. Now, not so much. I'm 18 now and I'm not nearly as depressing as I used to be, but still depressing enough. Message me and feel free to read my old poems... more..

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