Girls
A Poem by
SimplyDisastrous
Girls
Laughing
Making fun
Window shopping
Young
© 2010 SimplyDisastrous
Author's Note
I finally got it right! The perfect Lanterne. Thoughts? =]
Reviews
nice ha ha, very cool, great
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Hmmm nice wrap up on girls.
As for the window shoppers? That's men. They never carry bags.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Hmmm nice wrap up on girls.
As for the window shoppers? That's men. They never carry bags.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Interesting, very stereotypical of girls, but I still really like it. It's a nice Lanterne. Good job! :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Interesting, very stereotypical of girls, but I still really like it. It's a nice Lanterne. Good job! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on June 28, 2010
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SimplyDisastrous Hartford, CT
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Hey. I used to be on here alot when I was 15. Now, not so much. I'm 18 now and I'm not nearly as depressing as I used to be, but still depressing enough. Message me and feel free to read my old poems...
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