Girls

Girls

A Poem by SimplyDisastrous

Girls

Laughing

Making fun

Window shopping

Young

© 2010 SimplyDisastrous


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SimplyDisastrous
I finally got it right! The perfect Lanterne. Thoughts? =]

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nice ha ha, very cool, great

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm nice wrap up on girls.
As for the window shoppers? That's men. They never carry bags.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting, very stereotypical of girls, but I still really like it. It's a nice Lanterne. Good job! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 28, 2010
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SimplyDisastrous
SimplyDisastrous

Hartford, CT



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Hey. I used to be on here alot when I was 15. Now, not so much. I'm 18 now and I'm not nearly as depressing as I used to be, but still depressing enough. Message me and feel free to read my old poems... more..

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