He

He

A Poem by SimplyDisastrous

I doubt I will ever see,

Another man quite as lovely as he.

© 2010 SimplyDisastrous


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SimplyDisastrous
A couplet.

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I agree! There's always something about the first man. Nice couplet.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice couplet. Can't say much more than that really. Maybe add a comma after the first line.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on June 28, 2010
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SimplyDisastrous
SimplyDisastrous

Hartford, CT



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Hey. I used to be on here alot when I was 15. Now, not so much. I'm 18 now and I'm not nearly as depressing as I used to be, but still depressing enough. Message me and feel free to read my old poems... more..

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