It's funny

It's funny, she says she loves me.

But I wonder, if we'll ever be.

Author's Note

I think this is a perfect example of a crystalline form poem. But...maybe it's not because I can't really see this as anything that might create an image in someone's head...

>.< Dammit.

Reviews

[azlamalo]

I love it. I dunno if i got it the way you intended, but this is how I understand it- Two people who don't feel the same about each other.