Ihatefeelinganythingforyou

Wreathed in chains 

from the roots of longing, 

smothering, and ecstasy 

Your eyes are the diamonds of falling stars 

They tell a tale of romance and hurt 

You begin to wonder: "Where am I?" 

and "how could such hurt be so sweet?" 

Life and love is not, 

nor will it ever be, 

what it ever seems

Reviews

[Sabnock7]

needs some work but I like where it is going

[Scarlet Jackal]

Thank you, and yes I was planning on coming back to this one.