A Beautiful World With You

To the world you may be just one person, but to one person you may be the world.

When I feel blue

I remove any of my hesitations

Gather the wind

And clear the mind

 

Everyday is so wonderful

Joyous and elated as the sun rises

The eternal cycle continues

As we live through the years

 

When I’m alone

I look up to the sky

Counting the birds that pass by

How interesting life can be!

 

I think of you

Even the reason

I hold my head high

Is because of you

 

Another day to begin

The world is just so beautiful

Miracles happen everywhere

As I have seen another morning with you

 

Author's Note

Sometimes it feels like the world's on my shoulders, everyone's leaning on me. 'Cause sometimes it feels like the world's almost over, but then he comes back to me.

Reviews

[Mir]

I get the feeling the 'You' in this poem is God, but maybe I'm wrong. The only critic I have is that if you are talking about God with the 'You', then I think you should capitalize them because, you know, he's God. But that's just a matter of my opinion.
I really liked this poem. Life is so fascinating! Sometimes I find myself just staring up at the sky and thinking about the vastness of it. Great, great writing! :)

[Frieda P]

Sweet and airy, like the wind smiling. Bit of hope and whimsy in this read. Very nice.

[jdr / Jennifer]

Beautiful- Filled with a happiness that made me smile. Wonderful flow and such a positive message- thank you for sharing your work.

[kublakhan27]

Your writing always makes me smile...nicely done :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I like the way you led the reader to the very good ending. We must look for the good in our world. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jack...]

This is beautiful, very light and free. I could really feel your hope and desires in this poem. you are very talented Margarette. And also I would like to say, Margarette is a beautiful name.