A Wicked Love

How long until I find the strength to break this love curse?

There are times

When we wish to change ourselves

We try and try again

And we know that we can't

 

I continue to live

Where the storm never stops to exist

Here lies my hope

That the sun would come tomorrow

 

Tears overflow on my face

My heart is trembling with fear

I cannot fathom such turmoil

I must reconnect that vow

 

Press the back of memories

Regress through the past

Until a gentle song floats in the air

And the darkness unveiled along the way

 

The light of the moment

Give me back the chastity of forgiveness

I will live with you and be your guide

To the path of everlasting care and love

 

I want to share a future with you

I like to see the rising sun together

I need to give you what you've lost

I have to be there for you

 

The relentless promise you offer

Courageous acts display in front of me

As I go back to when we last met

The place where my broken future awaits

 

I will not run away now

I must face and follow what I have to do

Gone are the days where I live

In monochromes of feelings and desires

 

The sun rises in the east

The wind blows gently around us

A clear blue sky lies above

As we share our last kiss

 

I'm not ready to let you go

In hopes of keeping you mine

I let my jealousy ahead of my conscious mind

And stab you in the heart repeatedly

 

I rock your body close to me

Bathing myself with your viscous, luscious blood

Your blue eyes are perfect for my collection

To reconnect that lost vow I've had

 

Soon, pieces of parts will gather

Into completing this resurrection of mine

My true love, my first man

The only one who can stand amidst the storm with me

 

You'll have to wait for me

To end this suffering of yours

The ultimate spell to give you life once more

I guarantee I’ll bring you back

Reviews

[Natasha]

This was chalk full of emotion and great word usages. My favorite part was:
I rock your body close to me
Bathing myself with your viscous, luscious blood
Your blue eyes are perfect for my collection

Really love the way you use colors and descriptions so nicely.

[Hester Vane]

Simply wonderful! So eloquent and full of emotion!

[kublakhan27]

I am genuinely touched by the raw emotion you infuse your words with :)

[Frieda P]

Bring back the chastity of forgiveness, that says so much right there!

Great read but I like this stanza in particular....

I rock your body close to me
Bathing myself with your viscous, luscious blood
Your blue eyes are perfect for my collection
To reconnect that lost vow I've had

Wow, conjures up all kinds of images and emotions. Nice one.

[Margarette]

Thank you so much!

[Jack...]

Wow. so cool. You had me going on this one. I was thinking sweet love poem all along and then BAM!!! you pulled out that knife and things got cool. Nice one Margarette

[Margarette]

Ah yes. This is the consequence of a broken marriage, ending in more tragedy and drama. Hopefully, the killing would add more action to the story and it turned out brutal. Although I already planned in putting it somewhere in the poem.

[Jack...]

And you did so expertly and with a master's hand. You are very deep for as I gaze upon these waters, I can not see the bottom.

[Mary Christabel George]

Simply Beautiful...

[Margarette]

Thank you!

[Mary Christabel George]

Welcome

[khalid]

first love is ever lasting. however we face later, we stay all our lives with the memory of that first love. we feel it can never finish. it is the symbol of life then. we feel the end of it is the end of the world but unfortunately very few first love stories could survive..because later on, we discover that, it wasnt even love..i love your poem..

[Margarette]

Yes, that is the sad truth. Indeed, first love experiences may be the sweetest but also bitter at the end for most of us.