Until Then...Goodbye

The world underestimates me. I will prove you wrong.

Where are you now?

I’m just right here

Where are you now?

I might just follow you

 

Confronting this reality

I have an ominous feeling

Frightened and scared of tomorrow

I want to hide this flaw

 

This blindness of mine

Can never be cured

It has caused me your freedom

That I will never forget

 

You were always with me

Wherever I go, whenever I want

You should have said no

Then I’ll let you go

 

I tried to pretend

I have forgotten all about you

And sink into the bottom of a sea of memories

But such feelings never disappear

 

Back to that room

Time keeps floating by

Though the ticking sound has stopped

The piercing of my soul commences

 

I would call your name

While looking at the pictures

That we have shared together

Two people in love ending in tragedy

 

If I had heard the cry of your heart

If I had bore thoughts of you at that moment

If I had even cared for you at that time

Would you still leave and not say goodbye?

 

Where are you now?

I’m staying here

Singing you a love song

Will my voice reach you somewhat in the sky?

 

Do I have to make a step forward

And accept the present?

Because I know that day will come

Where “Goodbye” remains uncalled for us

 

Where are you now?

I’m just right here

Where are you now?

I’m looking for you now

Author's Note

Whatever you go through, it all makes your stronger. No matter how many tears, or how many screams, or whines. Even when you think, you're positive it's all making you weaker, and tearing you down from the inside. But it never does. It only prepares you for the future.

Reviews

[Shay]

so beautiful and amazing. i love it

[Margarette]

Thank you so much!

[lee von cleef]

I look down , rub my thumb and index finger together,yes my dad did this too, so am I thinking of him? is this action Genetic ? or is it him reaching "Across?" or me ? thought is strong, ideas are timeless, good ones are repetitive,Margarette you are good.

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful. This was seriously amazing. Great work!! :)

[Erinne S.]

This was great Margarette! I loved the flow you had going with your wording and it is so true that everything we go through on a day to day basis prepares us for our future. Well done :)

~Erinne

[eglantine]

You should def try writing lyrics--I have an inkling you'd be good at it

[Frieda P]

This is like apple pie for my mind. You weave a beautiful tale of regret and longing...yes what doesn't kill us is supposed to make us stronger in the end, in the interim it makes us crazy, and apparently produces lovely poetry. I love this to pieces, except for the small font, must you make me squint so early in the day? Lovely!

[Carolann Dowsett]

A lovely write very wistful and full of longing and regret. The future can indeed be a fearful thing but yes the trials we go through do make us stronger. A wonderful write.

[Lupus Kaos]

Interesting, really. I think you wrote from your heart, which is nice. The expressions are good and I found this reminding me of some things I have inside myself. I liked it, I liked it, I liked it. Thank you, this poem makes me feel like I can reach out and touch the person I loved and lost in the past. Thank you, may our voices reach the place they have to.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of hope and love. I like the desire to find each other. I like the flow of thoughts in the poem. The questions made the poem stronger. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[khalid]

another epic! i love how you could express the strong relationship gathering two in love that the speaker feels the idole one has the soul of them when they went away so the speaker cant live alone so they long to follow that idle to wherever they are regardless to what may happen then..i love it really