Alone

This is back from '95 when I was married to my first husband.

Alone. 

Unhappy. 

Pissed. 

Past. 

Heartbreak.

Angry.

Nightmare. 

Suicide.

Present. 

My own Hell.

A*****e. 

You and Me. 

Alone. 

* This was inspired from the beginning of my first marriage, on a night when I probably laid in bed alone.* 

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Well the will grab someone by the neck and make them scream. Nice work.

[daydreamer]

yep. i agree totally with you. loneliness can evoke strong emotions. Good write:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong use of words. Hard to be alone when you are with someone. When the wall are falling in. No place to hide. Thank you for the poem. Old poetry is very good. Allow us to go back in time for a moment. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mark]

and this was the beginning?