Love-Drunk

We sit. 

We wait. 

We ponder. 

We touch.

We smile.

We kiss. 

 For just awhile.

I love.

I try. 

I burn. 

I cry.

I shy.

I advise. 

At times I want to die. 

You see. 

You breathe.

You claim. 

You taste.

You touch. 

You yearn. 

You make my whole body burn. 

We learn.

We love.

We cherish.

We sit. 

We wait. 

We ponder. 

We touch.

We smile.

We kiss. 

And for just awhile, 

We love.

Until the end of this love-drunk trial. 

Reviews

[MAC]

absolutely perfect. love this!!

[daydreamer]

Beautiful write. it sounded as though words are flowing through wings of humming bird:)

[Luke Ritta]

loved this poem....it went by very fast....it was like beatnik a style work...which i love very much.
keep up the great work
well done:)

[nevermindfan1991]

This is an amazing poem about a love-drunk encounter. Beautiful, I loved how you turned this event into something so beautiful and genuine.

I'm getting drunk of your wonderful rambling. Lovely write, you take me within!

[Mark]

I'm an addict

[Coyote Poetry]

Punch-drunk love can lead to good places. Sometime need a little help to take down walls of fear. I like the flow and the very good ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kaylor Mason]

I can't think of a more pleasant form of intoxication :)