Morning

Close your eyes and start to think,

 

but don't leave her on the brink.

She may swear and she may cry,

 

but deep inside she wants to die.

You may have given her an early warning,

 

but you never know if she'll be there in the morning.

Reviews

[Moto Kaligawa]

This hits home, and yes we do have our pride.

Short and to the point, meter and rhyming work.

[Dream Weaver]

Short and powerful, loved the rhyming as well...

[Coyote Poetry]

Some questions are answer with more time. Sometime hard to see beyond the flesh and bones. A wise man hold on tight and treat a lady with kindness and class. Thank you for a excelelnt poem.
Coyote