Gasp

Gasp

A Poem by TranscendReality

Hot

Flesh

Drip

Sweat

Chain

Wrist

Love

Deep

Loud

Scream

Harsh

Whip

Wet

Lips

Faint

Cry

Soft

Sigh

Eyes

Stare

Skin

Bare

Minds

Dream

Souls

Seen

Child’s

Play

Please

Stay

© 2012 TranscendReality


Author's Note

TranscendReality
All my erotica romance has inspired me.

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I'm not sure if perhaps this isn't my style of writing or maybe it's the fact that I don't consider this writing at all. I mean, I can also open up a dictionary to random pages and write down all the words my finger blindly points out. I'm not even sure if this classifies as a poem.
Please, try and read up on poetry styles. This is just a list of random words. Perhaps you'd to a better job in typography and not writing as this literally makes no sense. Sorry. Try again. Good luck and happy writing.

Cheers!
0/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Wow! Absolutely brilliant razor-edge distillation of the juicy pulp of love-desire!

Posted 12 Years Ago


TranscendReality

12 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on October 3, 2012
Last Updated on October 3, 2012
Tags: romance, erotic, love, poetry, new

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Everyone makes mistakes. People change. Forgive. Dont be scared to walk alone. Music is more then what you hear, it's how it makes you feel. Let love find you. Remember you are ENOUGH. .. more..

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