Ambivalence

Ambivalence

A Poem by Sazaku
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A choice between two divergent paths in the road, 
left; a vibrant meadow, a carpet in vernal bloom;
and right, a majestic, sloping ridge of mountains
rising gently to gaze out over a tranquil lake.

It's tough to say say there's a wrong choice - some 
people might prefer the aromatic embrace of the wild,
and some might prefer the allure of endless blue.

I'm crazy enough to believe there is a third path
and that's to go straight down the middle, holding 
firm to the belief that somewhere along this line, 
I'll be able to experience both options for myself.

So while everyone else is living up their particular 
half, I'll just laugh and shake my head, catching the 
faintest scents of tulips and the slightest breeze 
of the ocean dancing in from between the distant peaks. 

And only in my heart will I admit how jealous I am of 
your ability to make such a simple decision with such
ardent conviction, to hold fast to the notion that the 
only thing worse than missing out on half of life's beauty
is to look back over your shoulder and realize too late
that you accidentally walked right past all of it.

© 2016 Sazaku


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Reminds me of the poem 'The road not taken' by Robert frost.
Only you added a nice twist,

A third parting in the meadow. A third road to take.
One that you carve out on your own.
But there's also regret in your poem,
Most people only think about the destination, and do not enjoy the journey.

Good poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sazaku

8 Years Ago

Huh, yeah you're right. Reading back over that poem, I can see the similarities. I guess when I read.. read more

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