When No Ones Around

When no ones around.
It comes out.
Everything.
The pain.
The noise.
It comes again and again.
My Blood cries.
It wants to see the world.
It doesn't know I could die.
When no ones around.
It comes out.
The otherside screams and he shouts.
About the things you don't know about.
Do you want to know what I do?
Nothing.
Scream untill the skies turn blue.
Then untill the blue turns black.
I just might come back.
When no ones around.
It comes out.
Loud.
Tears of blood.
Tears of loneliness.
Tears of abondonment.
Tears of sadness that no one has yet to under stand it.
When no ones around.
It comes out.
Me.
The one who hides under sheets.
The one who hides under his mask.
No one cares because no one asks.
No one looks because sees.
No one follows because no one leads.
When no one is around.
This comes out.

Reviews

[Noronradss55]

It kind of describes how I feel
sometimes, when no one is around.
This piece causes one to look inside
themselves. Thanks for sharing.
Happy holidays.

[Sterling]

I liked the expression that "my blood cries" very unique writing. Its a good piece, and I think with a little more fine tuning it could be masterful.