My Future Unborn Child

My future unborn child.
Ive been wanting to meet you for a while.
I dont know when we will meet.
But i cant wait to see you.
I will be the one to take care of you untill my hearts turns blue.
I dont know who your mother will be.
I dont know what you will look like.
But with all my might.
Ill protect you day and night.
Ill protect you with my very life.
My future unborn child.
Young and wild.
Your worth my while.
I know you will always make me smile.
I feel lonely not knowing who you are or when you will be in my life.
Ill just keep waiting and living my life untill you arrive.
This is no lie.
One day ill meet you.
I hope you will always love me.
I promise to love you.
And always tell the truth.

Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
My future unborn baby.
My future unborn child

Reviews

[Decanter Red]

Wow, ok...first time I get to read poetry about unborn children...

The flow and grammar might need a bit of touching up, such as "Ive when wanting to meet you for a while."
This part has a slightly awkward ring to it. I like the topic you chose very much, since it's quite unique haha! Oh, do pay some attention to the punctuation too. I might be a little picky saying that, but it might help you to sound more 'pro' ;) in some parts, punctuation may play a part in the flow of the poetry.

I am by no means an expert in poetry, I just review it from the point of an amateur reader ^^
But I really do like your ending:

"I hope you will always love me.
I promise to love you.
And always tell the truth. "

It is quite heartwarming!