End The Sadness

Roaming in darkness singing misery's song. Have i really been this sad for this long? I have stated my name. I have stated my reason. So why am i still stuck in this rainy season? Speak to me. Sing to me. And try to see the reason why im lonely. Am i invisible? Or am i dead? I lay asleep on the devils bed. Not knowing the dangers that lie ahead. This is my Dilemma. This is my cinema. This is my life. This is what makes me strive. Make me Feel alive. Because i feel like a soul. My heart is frezzeing cold. My life is unprotected . My heart is rejected. My love is to far away to be connected.

Reviews

[MichelleLaw]

I adore this! It's everything I'm feeling so maybe I'm biased ha but I like the flow of it. It's fluid and the occasional choppiness accentuates the right parts, creating a really beautiful rhythm. Good job :)