Joy

Poems            Savoring
Unadulterated Odor
Reminiscing     Umpteenth
Excellence-      Love.

Reviews

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

im not quite sure what to make of this...for some reason it remind of the artist equivalent of when they just paint a splotch on canvas and try to pass it off as "art" though i think your piece actually has a meaning behind it. though im not quite sure what it is...

[zombiikillah666]

hmmmm....... this is awesomelycoolrific.
these words rock socks.......
unadulterated odor....thats joy right there....lol....
j/k. but this is really good......

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

heh, great play of words. :)

[Abdul Aziz]

Dinesh, maybe you could try reading the first letters of all the words vertically. That should give you an idea!

[Dinesh Sairam]

I'm not sure how to re-assemble these words. Maybe it is good if put in the right order.

[Abdul Aziz]

A great description of a pure soul! Well thought, and well written.

[Ashley.M.E]

I myself don't find these to be poems =/ They are not exactly my favorite kind of qork, but that nonetheless doesn't matter. It's a nice piece.

[Ruth]

This is really interesting! Works both ways! The left side and the right side and both together!
xx

[RDOriginal]

This is so deep I don't really understand it! Whichever way I read it, either left to right or vertically I'm struggling to see how the words link together. I can see the logic behind how most of the words are related to the title 'Joy' but I'm not sure why 'Odor' is included? As a word it generally has quite negative conontations and whether it's something for 'savouring' or something 'unadulterated' I can't see the link to joy.

However, it looks like this work has won fans so I'll acknowledge that it's beyond me and say congratulations regardless!

[KatiePie]

I hardly ever get to read poems like this, just because not many people can write them (I am included in this group xD) So kudos to you for writing this, I enjoyed reading it haha I think I've already reread it like.. 7 times. It really is beautiful :)
-Cathrine