Birds

I opened my eyes to see my hand reaching for the ceiling of my room.

In my dreams I see,

a bird flying with the wind.

What's it like up there?

Reviews

[Mk.t.g]

Loved this one! Freedom of creatures such as the birds, are what humans desire the most right now!

[willweb]

Nicely penned. We often reach for things that aren't there but should be. This was nice

[Chris Shaw]

I can certainly relate to this brevity. The freedom of a bird flying in the thermals is one I admire when I am feeling overwhelmed or caged. Nicely expressed.

Chris