Beautiful curse

Bittersweet actuality of being able to get anything but keep nothing

A beautiful curse

Gracefully stealing your heart; was initially the easy part

keeping the one you're fond of is where it gets confusing,

Like pawns on the board, easily infusing

deciding when and where

flaunt a smile, toss your hair

Once your fire began to grew

It becomes everything you never knew

   and just like jello, it fell through;  

your fingers and down to your feet,

felt nice to hold but so hard to keep

With no definite shape, and nothing to refer to 

My love is tempting but forbidden, and this is how I cursed you

For each day when sun meets sky, may it be me you look to meet eye to eye

and when soft melodies accompanied by sweet words play, I hope it is with me, that you wish you did stay

And when anything braids, whether in hair or design, remember our  legs as they intertwine

Even at your riskiest, when the devil comes out to play, may it always be me you wish down to lay

See, it is pure love that spices up sweet things and it is pure love that corrupts short flings

Author's Note

I had a lot of fun with this one :-) I really hope you're able to enjoy

Reviews

[V]

I like the imagery and soft flow of your words. Though maybe I'd change began to grew (it actually has to be began to grow) into began to grow and in the next line it became everything you've never known. I hate to be picky, but sometimes I am a ruthless perfectionist. ...I hope, you understand my review as a constructive advice on writing.

[SavyNess]

Thank you I absolutely appreciate constructive criticism as much as compliments, I just kind of came up with it as I wrote it that's perhaps why there are a few errors.
Thank you! :)

[V]

You're welcome :) Keep on writing. The more you write the better and experienced your writings become.

[Sami Khalil]

A lovely romantic poem with soft melodies of the heart. Enjoyed the visit.............

[SavyNess]

Very pleased to hear so, thank you greatly!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome greatly.)))))))

[A hare off]

Wow, very nicely done. I love the formating on this, it gives a nice edge to the piece. This almost seems to be a tease, no offense intended. But it seems to say, here you go, here is the love you so desire, I hope you can hold onto it because I'm not sure I will let you keep it. Maybe I'm wrong but that is how it called to me. Really nice

[SavyNess]

Thank you greatly! This is a fun, engaging poem to say the least.
I am welcoming you to feel how you may about romance, it is one thing to obtain someone's attention/love but a whole other to maintain it. Beyond excited you enjoyed it. Thank you..

Savyness

[Leran Vakem]

A well written poem conveying your feelings to the reader. How easy is it to fall in love, but the real challenge is to stay in love. Very well written.
Well Done

L.V.

[SavyNess]

Alright, I'll admit it, this is my favorite comment. I had a lot of fun writing this off the top of my head but I am greatly satisfied knowing you were able to relate and appreciate my words. Thank you greatly.

:)

Savyness
xo