2 kids 1 bathroom

2 kids 1 bathroom

A Poem by SavyNess
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The chaos of too many doing the same thing in a small space

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2 kids 1 bathroom
What first started off as a silly old saying;
quickly referred to a lifestyle

Where even your neighbor 
filled up with anger
and quickly it became hostile

No one is at fault for doing the same thing;
  but naturally there is lots of clashing,bashing, bumping and bing

With too little space to do as you must;
  Even love can dim down to lust

All walk around; they huff and they puff
but in this inevitable world, no one is tough

© 2015 SavyNess


Author's Note

SavyNess
Try to imagine the morning chaos of a mother and two children trying to prepare for their day sharing only one bathroom, now remember that all of our peers are just trying to succeed much like you and I but due to the lack of opportunities we unintentionally get in each other's way and grow aggravated

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I thought this was such a fun read. I can image such a chaotic morning growing up the oldest of five as a child. Great write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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SavyNess

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much; glad you grasped that one... feared the figurative would be over looked! I a.. read more

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Added on July 16, 2015
Last Updated on July 16, 2015
Tags: Lifestyle, Life, Aggravation, Natural, Hostile, Space, Cramped

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A Poem by SavyNess