Endless

Endless

A Poem by SavyNess
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like the ocean

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I want a love like the ocean; endless
like the ocean; so deep anyone can drown in it

I want a love like the ocean, that sets off an ambiance anyone is made to enjoy
like the ocean; full of many beautiful things

I want a love like the ocean, constantly accompanied by the sun
like the ocean; padded by natures natural grounding

A love like the ocean; letting off a gentle breeze
  like the ocean; never burns regardless the degrees

© 2015 SavyNess


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SavyNess
Just off the top of my head

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This was killer! Love like an Ocean simile was so beautiful and touching to me.
"So deep anyone can drown in it." Yes!
T.C.C.I.C

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SavyNess

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I find majority of life's beauties are easily compared to natures many offering.. read more
Me too!
Great write, really enjoyed this and the wording is great
format unique and creative, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SavyNess

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I appreciate your response. Just a quick something with some natural inspiratio.. read more

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Added on April 2, 2015
Last Updated on April 3, 2015
Tags: Ocean, Endless, Love, Similie

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