Lingering Lust

All that is left of you are the marks you left behind

Your scent the only reminder of you that lingered as long as these purple prints

Best at apologizing for things that are not my fault

Explanation after the last, no warning no hints

Fluent; so natural

Rash stop; sudden halt

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

I love the title. It fits the angst and thoughts that you express in this short piece. It creates a image and that is art within itself.

[jay-lyse]

So short and yet so powerful. The first line is my favorite. The raw emotion brilliant. Great write

[SavyNess]

Thank you, I appreciate it so very much! :=)

[sinNsincerity]

"Your scent the only reminder of you that lingered as long as these purple prints."
This alone took me into a ponder. Love this Ness!
T.C.C.I.C

[SavyNess]

Thank you very much!
Always aiming for the visual, so I appreciate that!