Late

Late

A Poem by SavyNess
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close but no cigar

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Clenching my teeth; as hard as I fell for you

Balling my fist up; as if I'm preparing to break this wall down between us

Feeling all the heat from this hot love; boil my blood

Smiles simply removed from our faces
Distance and questions-  to fill all these spaces 

Where did you go and why?   Unnecessary answers
Old photographs and key chains; extra mood enhancers

If the song wasn't slow enough, there goes my heart rate
Fun while it lasted, but now it's too late

© 2015 SavyNess


Author's Note

SavyNess
Wrote as thought, at moment of.

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I do understand this poem. Song or similar place can set off a memory.
"If the song wasn't slow enough, there goes my heart rate
Fun while it lasted, but now it's too late"
The above lines are tasted by the most of us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SavyNess

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much I appreciate this. It is my pleasure to share, thank you for your feedback.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.



Reviews

I do understand this poem. Song or similar place can set off a memory.
"If the song wasn't slow enough, there goes my heart rate
Fun while it lasted, but now it's too late"
The above lines are tasted by the most of us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SavyNess

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much I appreciate this. It is my pleasure to share, thank you for your feedback.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Very unconventional flow.

I enjoyed the way you captured the rapidity at which these amazing feelings can vanish.

Keep up the good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SavyNess

9 Years Ago

Yes very unorthodox, I must agree. Of all aspects, the flow/format is my most experimental vantage. .. read more

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Added on January 9, 2015
Last Updated on April 3, 2015
Tags: time, disappointment, unrequited

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A Poem by SavyNess