Life on the BlockA Story by R.G. BennetDedicated to those of us who have yet to return to unfinished stories and their characters.CRASH. The four figures go sprawling across the threshold of the narrow doorway. There is a brief moment
of fuss as the jumble of arms and legs attempt to untangle themselves from each
other and then they begin to rise. One by one, they straighten their clothes
and take a moment to survey their surroundings. The place is massive. Massive and plain. They seem
to be in some sort of lobby area, drawn out with expansive grey walls that
curve into passageways on either side of the end of the room. The room is dotted
with neat furniture - tastefully simple décor gives it a sophisticated feel. “Where do you suppose we
are?” the first of the figures speaks, her hazel eyes taking in every inch of
the place. She entwines her golden locks between her fingers thoughtfully while
she tries to grasp a sense of bearing. “I cannot be certain,”
another says. He takes a step forward and gives the place a sweeping glance
before turning to the others, “but it is rather odd.” The other two are silent. A
tall young woman with a solemn expression. A short boyish-looking male who
seems to have borrowed his companion’s frown. There is a moment of silence while the group begins to closer examine the area before them - running hands along the smooth surfaces of the tables and sofas; curiously prodding the vending machine, trying out the pool sticks for size. “Teyl,” the tall girl pauses
and then begins motioning to the first female. Her eyes are alight with sudden
piqued interest. “You must come see---,” But she is interrupted by the
sound of approaching footsteps down the hall. All four stand silent yet again,
gazing warily at the entranceway, poised for flight in the event of some
nefarious happening. Instead they are greeted by
the sight of a rather attractive looking young man, who just barely manages to
yawn and run a hand through his tousled dark hair before noticing the scene
before him. He stops and raises a brow, curiously regarding the four visitors
for a few seconds. And then he begins to laugh. Momentarily thrown by his reaction, their defensive stances slacken as confusion overtakes caution.The young man’s chuckles subside, but he wears a broad grin as he says, “Four this time, wow she’s really picking up the pace…,” “Excuse me?” shorty speaks. The young man begins
chuckling to himself again, shaking his head as he approaches and begins
shaking each of their hands, “Patric M, queue 1. Welcome fr----,” But his hand is left to fall at the last shake. The tall girl gazes at him silently, her hands very still at her side.He holds her gaze for a moment and then the traces of a smile play at his lips as he unconcernedly slips his hand into his pocket and turns to face the others. “Friends. Welcome, friends.
Let’s just get right to it - what are your names? Hopefully you’ve at least
gotten to that point,” he looks up expectedly at the person nearest him. Goldie, already beginning to recover from the
oddness of the entire situation, readily answers, “I am Teyl.” Patric nods then looks across
at the young man next to her. “I have not yet been named,”
he says, the cadence of his voice steady and purposeful. “Neither have I,” shorty
pipes up next to him. “Soon,” Patric says
encouragingly and then he looks to the tall girl for her reply, but finds none
forthcoming. “Lua,” voices Teyl on her
friend’s behalf. “Thank you,” Patric addresses
Teyl, his gaze still directed towards Lua. He smiles and nods, “Strong, silent
type I’m guessing? Word of advice. Stay clear of Nigel Greene. For him, you’d
be like Christmas come early.” And then he walks to a fridge
in the corner of the room, opens it, and begins tossing water bottles behind
him without a single backward glance. They catch the bottles
easily, their agility evident, reflexes almost feline. “Impressive,” Patric speaks into the depths of the fridge, his back still turned. Teyl’s forehead creases
slightly as she asks, “How can you have se--,” “Oh, you’re soon to find all
that out anyway,” Patric replies, walking towards the sitting area of the room,
beckoning for them to join him on the opposite couch. Surprisingly, they all
comply. Even Lua. “Now,” Patric says,
unscrewing the top of his water bottle and taking a brief sip, “you may as well
get accustomed to being at home here. Trust me, it’s going to be a while.” “A while?” one of the unnamed
inquires. “Yep,” replies Patric,
gesturing around him, “see this building? All this is the House of Limbo.” “House of Limbo…,” the other
unnamed echoes quietly, as if tasting the name. “But where is this,” Teyl asks Patric directly,
“what is our location here?” Patric shakes his head and
when he next speaks, there is almost a note of regret as he says, “smack dab in
the middle.” “The middle of what?” Patric shakes his head again,
“In the worst part of town you can imagine. Here, look outside that window.” He
points the expansive glass lining the side of a wall, from which a rather grey
and lonely street can be seen. “That,” he says as all four
take in the scene before them, “is host to the wonderful House of Limbo you now
find yourselves in. They turn to look at him
again and he props up his feet on a table as he cheerfully delivers his next
response: “Welcome, friends…to Writer’s
Block.” © 2012 R.G. BennetAuthor's Note
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Added on April 5, 2012Last Updated on April 7, 2012 Tags: characters, unfinished, stories, dry spell, incomplete AuthorR.G. BennetDFW, TXAboutI've been in love with reading and writing from a very young age. Books have always been an escape for me, my constant companions, the characters my best friends, their world my haven. It is my gr.. more..Writing
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