"I speak too much
In lines and confusing metaphors
My silence I should tightly clutch
And watch you smile, as you confine my thoughts deep inside---
And slam shut the doors"
oooh i like this...i shouldn't have to say anything at all...i don't need to speak...my thoughts should be locked deep inside you without me penning them or verbalizing them...we are one.
and maybe words just do confuse the issue.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Wow, I agree. Nicely put and thanks for the review Jacob! :)
Silence can, indeed, be just as beautiful and timely as a well chosen metaphor....for silence speaks just as loudly (sometimes louder) than words. Beautiful, insightful write, dear Savannah!
Oh how I feel this one currently. One must choose carefully with whom to not share thoughts and feelings--just as long as one also chooses someone within whom to confide. Very well done!
Hi, my name is Savannah. I am originally from the West Coast but live in Kansas now. I love to write and I love to read; one of my current majors is Creative Writing. I have a blog I am restarting soo.. more..