Burn

Burn

Do you want me to burn?

See me engulfed in flames

Nowhere to turn

My soul forever in pain

Is this how we all die?

In moments like these

With no time for goodbyes

Burning like forests of trees

You thought of justice

When no one was in the right

So you took the rules and the iron fist

And saw me as evil on sight

Is this how we all die?

In moments like these

With no time for goodbyes

Burning like forests of trees

Reviews

[Kamari's]

Wow may I just say wow gives me a image of the Salem witch trials if that's appropriate please tell me anyways the ending was solid and this made me feel angry for people accusing of evil and didn't get to say good bye very well wrote .

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you. It does fit historically and metaphorically in image. Thanks and good job for catching both! :)

[Kamari's]

Thank you I was worried I got it wrong but the contents made it in that time and I enjoy your writing please if you have anything you want reviewed you can request me

[Savannah Bly]

Absolutely! To you the same.

[a-voice]

A wonderful poem .. ! I admire it !

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you!

[Asem]

love it so much i think its mean a lot

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you so much for your kind words!

[FlamingPhoenix]

This is incredibly relatable and beautifully penned! I do think this is how parts of us die.

[Sami Khalil]

"Is this how we all die?

In moments like these

With no time for goodbyes

Burning like forests of trees"

[A. Amos]

This is simply elegant and wonderful write, you wrote from the deepest part of your heart and while reading one can sense from soul...amazing piece of work my friend, keep it up.

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you so much! I am gad you enjoyed it.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear

[Sami Khalil]

Fuel love, burn injustice, rain blessings. A wonderful write...:).......

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you my friend!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................