Deep, very deep

Something from my indisde...

Deep, very deep

Under the waves

beneath the whales.

In the deep blue sea.

Deep, very deep.

Where coldness embraces light

Where darkness shows its face.

Where sea current can't flow through.

Deep, very deep

Where Sun shines no more,

and no sound can be heard,

yet thoughts can run free.

There my eyes can't see.

There my lungs can't breath.

There my head spins madly on

There my heart feels oppressed.

Deep, very deep.

Heavy feelings pulls me to the bottom,

heavy thoughts come out of nowhere,

and they recall darkness to my being

Shattered dreams?

Confused ideals.

Unconscious pain?

Pretended happiness.

Reckless impulses?

Fire inside my heart.

Unsober mind?

Teary eyes.

Deep, very deep

all those demons hide

they stay undercover

'cause they cannot be dismissed.

So I have to stay alive...

Author's Note

Spelling mistakes corrected. If you see anything else let me know please :D
Ok, NOW there should not be mistakes xD

Reviews

[Moonie]

This might just be your best piece so far! I absolutely love love love it!

[Fernando Dardón]

ANd I absolutely love your review. Thanks!!! :)

[Antoñyo]

The last line made it all come together. I enjoyed this, Thanks for sharing

[Fernando Dardón]

THANK YOU VERY MUCH. I appreciate very much your review. Seriously :)

[A Humble Poet]

Great! I was reading so intently the whole time I just love how it sucks you into the poem! ^_^

[Fernando Dardón]

Yes, actually that was the intention. To introduce myself into the poem little by little. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it so much!!