A Moment To Share

Dedicated to muy dejar friend of school: Jessy Alfaro

Her face turned out to be pretty,

As seconds passed among time.

But l'm not so sure,

Where her poet words are.

Years distant us from youth,

And each other traced their way.

Those who once belonged,

Are now dispersed by life.

We had lots laughings,

And we shared tons of words,

Making each others better writers,

As we delighted with heartfull poems.

And I was lucky the other day,

To stumple upon a brother,

One of them,

With whom I shared so much.

He was glad to see me,

And so was I to hear him,

And for an instance

I felt past went back,

As I knew, he still was the same he was.

But then I see you,

Girl nicknamed Narayana,

And imagined you eating the moon,

And to say that since then,

There is a crescent.

Powder covers your cheeks,

As the more you apply,

The more red they turn.

Straight and sleek hair covers your ears,

And adorable bangs your forehead.

But I keep wondering,

Is everything has to be like this?

I wonder to see you again,

My dear Narayana.

I hope you to remember me,

Ma jeune fille chérie.

As I remember last time I saw you,

When you tasted that slice of cake that birthday.

I just hope I was giving you,

More than a piece of dessert.

As I was giving you a moment,

A moment to share with a dear friend...

Author's Note

Have you ever wish to live again good moments of life? I do :')
And con the picture, La petite Narayana :)

Reviews

[Fernando Dardón]

Oh brother she's so beautiful, and so are you, this poem speaks volume... those little treasures of the past, are those we build further on, and I feel the rich energy in this beautiful poem/song... I can relate so much, I have treasured simular moments like these, and pictures, and recording some special music goes along with the past... I loved this... you are so talented my dear brother... I love La petite Narayana... wonderful.. -x- :)

[Fernando Dardón]

This poem has a story you know? It all started when I was on high school, we both went to a writers club that philosophy teacher was giving, on the elementary school's library. The Narayana nickname was because a short story we read on one of the reunions, that talk about a little girls called Narayana. She once decided to go outside, one night, and eat half Moon, since then ( according to the story of course) there is a crescent Moon. My friend fit so well on the child's description that since then we all called her that way :D

Yes, I know, that's why I could relate so well, as I told you. But the way you've written it, is always musical to my ears, that's why I called it a poem/song, (but of course with a rich storyline and anacdote, and memory in it brother). I love that pic of you two, it's timeless, and marvelous. Pen on... be back soon!

[Fernando Dardón]

I'll be waiting, we got to talk soon, got so much to tell! Btw, thanks for calling my poem " poem/song" never thought it had musicality xD thank you so much!

Oh you can call me this week, I find a moment.... :) will let you know.... xD yes, you are talented, in each and every way.... :) ♫ and.... in storyline.....

[Fernando Dardón]

OK I'll wait your advice, and I'm not the only one talented :)

Well to me you are.... always! -x-

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and sometimes we are able to have a moment that reminds us of the past, even if it is just a moment and then we realize we cannot bring the past back.

jacob

[Fernando Dardón]

Yes, youre so damn right, but i always hope to see her again.... :) thanks for the review!
Good to see u around my friend :)