And on the road, I try

This is a poem dedicated to a special friend of mine, to her very special (and though to understand to me) style of writing: Elisa Enjoy :)

And there's a person I know
whose words lay above mines,
they remain on the sky, don't know how,
but impetuous, it flies.

Her surreal spoken verses,
pierce deep inside my heart,
and I feel the sublime phrases,
till I get to know apart.

It’s colored dense smoke
sometimes dark, sometimes clear,
lets me see some truelish stroke
but sometimes makes me feel fear.

It makes me wonder why,
gives me ideas to unscramble.
And on the road I try,
but they get me to ramble.

Then, yesterday and tomorrow
I come back again, over the noon
I face your words, and get to know
with some hope to come soon

The time to get to feel the meaning,
more than contemplate its beauty
But on the poem's evening
find that kind of missed booty.

And, Oh I see those phrases!
As mines, the path to follow
learn from the essence it embraces,
the happiness and sorrow.

Her pen shall be something to admire
since mine all that can do is to try

Even if my soul’s not on fire,

Or it feels like wanting to cry.

Even if I feel, that I can do no thing

Nothing seems to be better than tasting

Her poems, I’m always reading

Consternated, irradiated by her so far meaning.

Maybe, when time gets to be an old friend

And the shattered pieces of me to find

Get together at the end

I shall immerse in the world of your mind.

Author's Note

The picture is a photograph of the Reforma Avenue at night, in the zone 9 of Guatemala City :D

Reviews

[Fernando Dardón]

I so love this, dear brother, and I feel the distance of our words, that are cut into other worlds, of imagination, yet, so close, I love the feel you express yourself towars my words, and the understanding brother, is just not so difficult as it seems, I'm just speaking my heart, rather more than the most, just I use metaphors, of nature, that embrace my whole way of thinking.

I so loved this write, you are precious, and I not have forgotten you, I just am in the middle of a very tough time, all is explained on my page, and I try to be back soon... know you are always in my heart, lil one, and your music, and guitar are those I miss.... but most of all your heart. You are a wonderful person, and sweet brother. I can't thank you enough for doing this for me...

Lot's of love hon, and blessings, from here to you, we will talk soon on the phone, and then you can play me all your newest songs, can't wait to hear them dear. -x- :) Love yah brother...

[Fernando Dardón]

It's so nice to see you around, hope everything gets better on your life soon sis. I'm glad you liked it, and that this poem has been some kind of council for you :)

I try a bit in my early morning, must leave soon again... It's so nice I finally could read it, I just missed your words, and it does me really good, to have read it, and to have giving it my honest time. Thank you for your sweet words, dear broter, I so appreciate you, :) every poem I read on here is a unique council, for everyone is learning... we are all never ending students, in a big world, of learning... so I loved it.... :) (((HUGS)))

[Pax]

My friend, this is a great tribute to her, she will like this, it is heartfelt, like how she have touch your soul through her poetic expression. She is an amazing person, a good friend and family to me... Her world is as vast as her poetry does... you did well on this piece... great!

[Fernando Dardón]

Yeah, you bet it, shes an amazing poet and person. :)

Thanks to you too Paxie, sweetheart... sigh, my two sweet brothers... love you both! -x-