Unpredicted End

They say that the eyes are the door to the soul...

Embrace me with your love,
Embrace me with your beauty,
Let my soul fall in love with yours,
Let time go by,
and then let me fall to pieces.

Suddenly, and see it in your eyes,
a reason to stay inside your heart,
be in love as a fool
and wish I had never met you
stay away, as a strong one

as soon as I started loving you
I should stop loving you

Reviews

[Fernando Dardón]

When you're able to fall to pieces for a loved one, it's true love, my brother, you capture the essence of love real well again here, during your romantic heart. I am in awe, of the talent always you come up with, it's not a knowledge percee, it's more of an true "alma" you have one. Like I said before, girls wake up, Don Chisciotte della Mancia... is around the corner ;-) with his guitar, and love songs.... awesome stuff bro.

- Elisa

[Fernando Dardón]

jajaja, you made me smile!! thanks for that. I wanted, this time, to make a little poem but with essence. :D

Jeje than my mission is compleated. :) Love to see you smiling little bro. :) lol.... you are one of della Mancia's sangre.... for sure... jejejeje!

[Fernando Dardón]

but I don't have Spanish ancestors :D

Nope, but you are a Guate, kissing Mejico, kissing Belize, kissing, Honduras, y El Salvador, Eyyyy, you're world wide :D grande... eh! :D

P.s. Et avec votre sang français exotique ... et les racines ... lol.... FORMIDABLE FOOOOOORMIDABLE... ;)♫

[Fernando Dardón]

maybe that counts :D

Toujours aussi humble que vous soyez, il vous convient bien .... ;) sister WINKIES....

[Fernando Dardón]

grave? Gracias!!
Du bist sehr freundlich :)

Danke sehr, meine bruder..... ;) du bist auch! jawol.... ;)

[Shaquana Adams]

I like the sudden realization in the poem. It's like you know it's bad, but it's too late because you are already knee deep in it, like quicksand lol. Great job :)

[Fernando Dardón]

thank you very much!!
Indeed, it is a late realization.
You understood the hole meaning of the poem :)

[Shaquana Adams]

You're welcome:)