Looking for your heart

Hope is the last thing that dies...

I’ve thrown my cards on the desk
I seem calmed but I don't rest
I try not to think so I can't fall
on my disgrace.

I love you more than I ever thought
Nights feel so lonely without your call
the phone is ringing on the other side
I’m calling

But you were with me,
I didn’t realize
that’s why I've come to say
I need you in my life

I’m looking for your hands
I’m looking for your arms
I'm looking for your happy manner
I'm looking for my love
for my love

It doesn’t matter how long it takes
how much time i have to wait
if its for you ill do anything
to get you back

I see our picture on my facebook wall
All i can do is to sigh
The only time when I think of you
is when I'm breathing...

But you were with me,
I didn’t realize
that’s why I've come to say
I need you inside my heart

I’m looking for your hands
I’m looking for your arms
I'm looking for your happy manner
I'm looking for my love
for my love

Author's Note

Ok, the second version is done. Please don't laugh, I guess I'm a little out of tune :D

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such a lovely song, Fernando!
I am so glad to stop by and read this...
It resonates hope for love, a heart song with a beating heart..
How romantic to be thought of in this way!

My sis, Eli, is right... You write lovely songs!
My sis, is your sis... that makes us family too! :)

Well done!

[Fernando Dardón]

Thank you ver y much!! This is actually the end of the story that everyone wants but that didn't end as spected.
Indeed, I have a new family member, and you have a new family member ;)

When i have the music I'll add it, ok? :)
Im so glad you liked it ...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

That would be awesome to hear... :)
Yes, now your my bro too! :))
Looking forward to reading more...

[MoriartyMesa]

I spend a great amount of my time reading what is behind a word or phrase, and i always ask what is being held back. What are we hiding, is what my mind begs to know?

[Fernando Dardón]

I'm afraid I don't exactly understand what you're saying. Can you explain me please?
Thanks for reviewing by the way

Javier

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such longing...so well expressed, especially the last stanza...as the speaker seeks for all those parts of the love he is missing.

[Fernando Dardón]

Thank you very much. I appreciate very much your review :)
I'm glad you liked it

[Fernando Dardón]

I'm so proud of you my sweet hermanito... sigh, listening to you calms me. :) I came back again, because you're worth the whole package. :D

Your music is so heartfelt, so real.... that's why it touches me, I am moved by family, by people who make music, or writings out of there true "Alma" you know... you do.

Beautiful... the sound is so good now, yay! :) so proud of you xx

- Elis
Besitos y Abrazos x

[Fernando Dardón]

:) I'm very very glad you liked it!!!
Maybe, soon, I'll be able to record em more professionally. You see, that song has better quality than the other one :D

You are awesome hermanito... love you dear one. Please keep on making your art, I'm following you everywhere. :) Can't wait to your next poem & song xx

[Fernando Dardón]

:3 thank you very much ...

De nada tesoro! ... keep on exploring your artworks! you are good and great.

[Fernando Dardón]

It's a perfect song my brother, I loved the voice, and sound of it, thank you for the sneak preview ;) I am proud of you... you everytime come up with something totally new, and this one is no exception.

I love it.
The guitar play is really smooth, and good, It calms me.

Such a great musical heart you have my brother, thank you for being you,
And always for the inspiration! :)
Beautiful lyrics, so truly romantic.

- Elisa

[Fernando Dardón]

So truly sad also, thanks for this magnificent review dear, you know I will always appreciate it.read moreSo truly sad also, thanks for this magnificent review dear, you know I will always appreciate it.
Although, I'm still not sure about publishing the song :P
Thank you very much for all, you encourage me to keep composing music :)

Thank you too, your review got cut off, but (a glitch of WritersCafe lately) next time always copy past your text before you put it here, (in case off)... just a tip. But I read your whole comment in the live-feed, so I did know what you told me dear. I think the song is awesome, only the quality is bad... you should wait for the right moment, with better recording stuff.... ;) but oh my goodness, how did I loved it. Thank you sweetie.

[Fernando Dardón]

thanks!! :)

Very welcome bro !! always :)

[Shaquana Adams]

I would say this definitely sounds like a song. It's awesome.

"It doesn’t matter how long it takes
how much time i have to wait
if its for you ill do anything
to get you back"

I hope the beat increases with this verse, because then it'll be probably be perfect! Thanks for sharing! :)

[Fernando Dardón]

Thanks you to review!!!!! I uploaded the song already, if you want to hear it. But just notice, I'm not a pro singer, so don't expect high quality recording nor perfect tuned voice :D