she could fall in love

she could fall in love

A Poem by Fernando Dardón
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A lyric that talks about a girl I fell in love with, but whom I couldn't express my feelings

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She could fall in love

18 de abril de 2013 a la(s) 18:54
She sat there, doing her stuff
But the seat is empty.
She seem to smile when i come
But i can’t see her come anymore

I knew she was true, and how she was
I knew she could fall in love

Somewhere far away, 
lies another broken hope
written in some space
lies another unknown song
Where nobody can find it
Deep in my soul…

I was there, yes
To listen to her, and she clearely saw that.
But I never could be listened
As time passed among us

I knew she was true, and how she was
I knew she could fall in love

I knew she could fall in love of me

© 2014 Fernando Dardón


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Its lovely and very sweet you can feel how much emotion was written in this piece.100

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so sweet my brother, you truly connect to your beloved.... your empathy is rich, your feelings as a musician, woven through you, poetry of heart is easy for you :) I'm smiling, keep on posting the great work.... ♫

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fernando Dardón

10 Years Ago

hearts doesn't communicate with spoken words dear... :)
Fernando Dardón

10 Years Ago

and thanks for that... :3

10 Years Ago

♥ true!!! you're real family to me! you know my heart strings! :D always welcome!!!!

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Fernando Dardón
Fernando Dardón

Guatemala City, Guatemala, Guatemala



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I'm an engeneering student who likes "non-engeneering stuff". That's why none of the people I am with undestands me. I've allways been very curious about things (the reason why I'm studing engeneering.. more..

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