We float in and out of these feelings like ships without captains, it seems. We find ourselves within days like these only to be thrown headlong into their opposites. This was lovely in that it showed the beauty that can exisit, and therefore the need for each of us to continue pushing forward toward that beauty. Well done.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you very much. This poem is actually about a day that was so special to me and, although I wis.. read moreThank you very much. This poem is actually about a day that was so special to me and, although I wish I could experience it again, it made me a better person. I sometimes miss that moment, and that's why Im so thankfull
Well you have portrayed all your feelings in this piece:) Hopefulness that your days will be as good as the day you say is the best day you ever had.Well written:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you very much! Indeed, it was one of my best days ever. :)
We float in and out of these feelings like ships without captains, it seems. We find ourselves within days like these only to be thrown headlong into their opposites. This was lovely in that it showed the beauty that can exisit, and therefore the need for each of us to continue pushing forward toward that beauty. Well done.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you very much. This poem is actually about a day that was so special to me and, although I wis.. read moreThank you very much. This poem is actually about a day that was so special to me and, although I wish I could experience it again, it made me a better person. I sometimes miss that moment, and that's why Im so thankfull
This must have been a special day to you, I don't know why, but there lays much emotion, during this day, and you write on a mature way about it.... I see this as a new beginning to something. Very well done.
- Elisa
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10 Years Ago
Yes, it actually is, cause I finally got rid of all the bad, sad and aching feelings abut my last lo.. read moreYes, it actually is, cause I finally got rid of all the bad, sad and aching feelings abut my last love. I decided to keep what made me better and happier. And I know there's a good side of the story, 'cause our relation was never like hell.
10 Years Ago
Thank you very much Laura :)
10 Years Ago
Great you have explained it my friend... :) thanks a lot!
De Nada dear, I hope you are happy and I hope all is well with the exams too :)
10 Years Ago
yeah, things has turned out kinda tough, I haven't had any good grades... But, if it doesn't hurts d.. read moreyeah, things has turned out kinda tough, I haven't had any good grades... But, if it doesn't hurts doesn't works. Surrender has never been an option to me. :)
10 Years Ago
That's the way I like it to hear!!! :) great attitude!
I'm an engeneering student who likes "non-engeneering stuff". That's why none of the people I am with undestands me. I've allways been very curious about things (the reason why I'm studing engeneering.. more..