Sobbing above the sky

A poem to a heartbreak, a unintentional heartbrake, a poem to a love story

They are running so fast
He's grabing her gand
he's pushing away
the ones that don't move appart

He's got to distract
the thieves behind
They hide away
decided to wait a while

They keep going on
through the crowded streets
One of the pirates saw them
and the chasing starts again.

They arrive to the port
without making any noise
he is shaking
so does her love

She's trying to talk
                "Shh..You can't make any noice"
He holds his beloved's face
                "Got so much to tell,
          got so little time"

Her watery eyes,
reflect confusion on her mind.
Her watery eyes,
reflect the fear inside her heart.

              "What is it then?
                         what's happening?"
She starts crying,
he holds her hands.

He sorrows, he has to leave.
              "It was all my fault,
                       I need to leave,
                               for your own sake"

              "Wait, don't!..."
He jump off the dock             
He didn't know how to fly
and the darknes embraced him.

She fell on her knees
she looked to the sky
She saw the rain beat hard
She saw her hands empty

The noisy water harased her
She tried to scream,
but couldn't even hear her sobbing
She blured away,
time was now meanless
'cause her heart was now restless...

Author's Note

I reiterate, English is not my first language, I do make grammar and spelling mistakes :D
Hope you like it!! :)

Reviews

So romantic Hermanito, just tell me this is another song of yours? :) I would love to listen too.

Your Spanish is hearable through your English, but I find that most charming. :) (you know it has more music, of heart ;) ).

So very lyrical, romantic, and well spelled for me.... I loved it.

Thank you so much.

- Elisa

[Laminators Dubai]

You don't have that boom boom but yes I liked it a lot!
Keep it up! Have fun!

[Fernando Dardón]

D: haha, ok sincere review. Thanks a lot!!!!
Let me tell you, this was actually extracted form a chapter of a novel Im writing, and I decided to turn it into a poem.

[Laminators Dubai]

Ok....well that solves the puzzle. Thanks!