Then

A poem that reflects my disillusioned feelings for a girl.

Then, what's gonna happen then?
because then, I don't know what to do.
I placed my faith on you,
so did my friendship.
I spent my time on you,
I didn't care, because I loved it

But then, I don't know what to expect.
And if I give a rose to you.
One you didn't get to have,
'cause it got stuck on the strings of my guitar
when I was about to let it sound.

Then, then I shouldn't have asked to have lunch
with someone whose heart beats loud,
'cause that someone doesn't knows how,
get to place a kiss on your mouth
with such delightful words
which wished I have had by then.

Then, then I just wanna see your face.
Take a deep breath, pretend to be your friend,
But to learn to get used to the idea
that your hands are not mines
'cause time flew away, leaving me behind.

Reviews

[Fernando Dardón]

I think then is never there, for it has to come yet... you have a very interesting analogy here, it's time-related, and I wonder, as a wonderer too, always what the future will bring, but we can't for the future isn't there yet... it's beautifully romantic, sad, true, raw and honest, I did enjoyed this piece my friend.

You keep on writing... I shall come by soon for more of your stuff :)

- Elisa

[Fernando Dardón]

Yeah, this poem reflects my feelings about a good friend of mine, I met her on the college, but she doesnt's know I'm in love with her (typical huh! -.-).
Now, I came too late, she's got boyfriend, but my heart is strong and I'll keep being the good friend I always tried to be all this time ;)

You're brave to do so. When she really likes you, she will see you one day, all the more ;) patience is the key to this situation. You're a good guy. Girls will notice :)

[Fernando Dardón]

thanks, that means a lot to me (damn, is there any way to get out of here,it happened the same with FB years ago,now WC??!! D: Maybe an Internet conection problem will fix the issue, for sure :D)

That's why I closed my damn facebook page!!! lol ;) now focus on your exam!!! jajaja..... ;) chat soon! friend :)

[Dminor6]

Nice. "...to learn to get used to the idea/that your hands are not mines..." - it echos of a Pablo Neruda line: "...so close that your hand on my chest is my hand..." Bittersweet dichotomy...

[Laminators Dubai]

I'm glad it read it....

because then, I don't know what to do.
I placed my faith on you,
so did my friendship.
I spent my time on you,
I didn't care, because I loved it

love these lines

[Fernando Dardón]

You're so gentle!, thanks :)
Hope you'll keep reading my writings, and find more stuff to like :)

[Laminators Dubai]

its not "gentle'' its "glitch" lol
have fun! wc