I see no her

A poem that describes the fake her beyond the girl I once was in love with

Where did she go?
Where's the time she spent?
When she was on my head?

She took herself away
somewhere I don't know.
Only a husk was left.

She took all she gave,
only a sigh remains
for the things I once felt.

Her name's unknown
so does her tidy face,
that her make up coats.

And I speak to a strange
'cause the gleam in her eyes
dimmed with her fake grace.

I see no little care
on her tasteless words
that once were beloved ones.

I see no childish girl.
I see a grown up her,
who forgot herself

I see the now and yesterday
of two different pictures
where only one I recognize.

What a shame, what a shame,
that she had gone away,
leaving her prince alone.

Such a deep sadness I feel
to see her indifference
when I gave all I got

Author's Note

It's nearly done :D
The image is a picture 5 years ago, when we were just friends

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"She took all she gave,
only a sigh remains
for the things I once felt.

Her name's unknown
so does her tidy face,
that her make up coats."
Sorry all that happened. The poem is really good...:)

[Fernando Dardón]

Thanks, I really appreciate it. Yeah, she turned out from being a adorable girl to an unknown "woman".

[Sami Khalil]

I understand...You are welcome...:)

[ms.seliz]

This is very good, although very sad. To me, it shows the pain and heartache of growing up, and a relationship ending. Keep up the good work!