A Rose For You

This is actually a song i wrote a month ago. Hope you like it. It also got melody, finally. Its quality is kinda bad, but it works (at least til I record a better one :D)

A Rose For You

To see your face

within a place

To see you smile

when I come around

To make you laugh

when I talk about

No matter what I say

if it's insane

I saw you there

wondered if you cared

about what I do

a rose for you.

I asked If you could

take care of them

just for a while

the roses for you

CHORUS

And I come to you,

to see if I could

take your heart

somewhere high above

in the sky

And place a kiss

on your cheeks

and lips

and say what I feel

that I like you dear

so here I am

shaking in my hands

with my guitar

N' some verses from my mind

shoutin' aloud

feeling dumb

risking it all

coz might be my last chance

CHORUS

FINAL BRIDGE

and I can't express

what I feel with my lips

if there is some way

it would be like this

Please let be my poems

and my songs steal your heart .

As you did to my heart

with your eyes

and your smile

and the things that you like

and the way that you are

Author's Note

Hope to get the lyrics and melody together soon :D
Ok, heres the complete song, with the lyrics :D
Sorry for the mistakes, I get nervious when recording :p


https://soundcloud.com/saverio-ferran/a-rose-for-you-vf1

Reviews

[A Humble Poet]

The words flow very nicely, and the song is very beautiful!

[Annie S]

Wow beautiful song. I'm a song writer too. Love how you rhyme your words
I actually tried singing it lol
Well done :)

[Fernando Dardón]

Thanks!xD did you tried to chek out the melody's link?

[Annie S]

yup lol pretty good i should say :)

[Annie S]

yup pretty good i should say :)

[Fernando Dardón]

Thanks, you should know I got no professional recording equipment :D thats why I doesn't has a HD sound.

[Annie S]

To be honest it i like the way it sound :)

[Fernando Dardón]

Thanks!!! :) that was a song for an unrequited love D:
Have you checked out the link on the description?

[Maria Jane Rafuse]

Awesome song! I really like it ^_^