How It should be

How It should be

A Poem by MechanicalFaeire

My heart
Does it beat faster as you near me?
Because your near me?
Does it throb in my ears because you enter the room?
Does it stop because you kiss me?
Does it ache because you leave?

Your eyes
Do they sparkle because you love me?
Do they smile because I’m here?
Do they cry because of what I said?
Do they lower at your guilt?
Do they understand what your heart feels?

Do we know? Can we ever know ?

We can know that in our minds we believe that love is in the heart.
Believe that we can feel love with our eyes
Believe that we are forever.
 But we can never know.
Nothing lasts forever.
Because life ends..
But in my mind our hearts are more than organs 
and eyes do more than see the norm
 
So even though we don’t know
We can dream and believe and love with all our hearts
Because it should be like the movies
And that’s how I intend to live it
With you by my side

© 2011 MechanicalFaeire


Author's Note

MechanicalFaeire
Tell me what you think. i put a lot of thought into this piece so i hope you like it

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It's great. It feels like a dream. The writing is beautiful, but the faerie-tale way it sounds makes it so unrealistic it's like it literally is the dream. I think that detracts from the gorgeousness of the writing. But don't worry, it's still amazing. ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


AW, i love it,but we hacve to come to reality on some things. Sure being in love with someone is great,but we can't think everything will always be a happily ever after. Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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MechanicalFaeire
MechanicalFaeire

Canton, OH



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