Dependence

Dependent - subject: being under the power or sovereignty of another

Help me 

I don't understand and I don't know why

This could be a good thing these troubles that arrived

But I see you

In the midst of my confusion 

My broken compass

Where am I?

Like the oceans in the night, I really am unsettled

A small, small vessel floating I fall 

Though not too deep not high at all

Afloat does not help I am among much unsaid...

But I can not control this vast ocean in my head

If it were up to me I'd be sunken

dead

I have no choice but to depend

on the One Most Sacred 

I look to the sky,  

the very volt between You and I

A good thing

I need not ask why

I will live each day by day

Honestly I can say

I can be my own worst enemy

May it be Your will not mine

I realize it's eternity not something for uncertainty.

So float no more. Confusion at its end

In the way of the Lord is where I will begin....

By: Savannah L Lara

Author's Note

open for constructive criticism :)

Reviews

[XxWhatsername86]

The grammar actually slipped my mind but any way amazing piece I love it :)

[Ashley]

A very beautiful and well written poem. I didn't even notice the grammar until I read the "Author's Note".