The ledge

random thought

Standing on a cliff, 

Looking to the sky as tears stream down your face slowly.... you take a step back, the ledge brakes... 

as you plummet to your death a flood of emotions come rushing in, 

Help was just an arms reach away... you made the decision to pull your hand back from the chance of being saved, you chose to be selfish when you pulled your hand away from your savior... your body slams below the ocean line... quickly sinking deeper and deeper as your final breaths escape your lips as bubbles rushing to the surface alls you can think about is how you let everyone down as you left them behind...you're destined to suffer for all eternity

Reviews

[Correspondence]

This is well written, but it seems as though this was accidental. "The ledge brakes," only because said character hesitated. I may have read it wrong, but it is a nice piece.

[Savage (Xan)]

Thank you i try to write this kind of stuff as of i were venting out i apologize if its accidental? As you said i just write how i feel is all

[Correspondence]

yes, I think it was operator error. Read it wrong ; - ;

[Savage (Xan)]

Mistakes happen no worries

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

I have, many times, felt the feeling of letting down my family members and sometimes I actually have let them down.