My redemption

To a girl who changed my life, but its better to have loved and loss then to have never have love at all.

Ashes to fate
From dusk to dawn
My heart once beat
But now its done

Once you saved me
I could finally see
Once dark now light
I don’t have to fight

I’ve  seen things bad
But you’ve seen worse
Your tears makes me sad
My luck is your curse

Though I love you
You inspire me
Everyday to try
And quit the fight

 

Reviews

[Neg]

Great writing, you are very talented. Keep up the good work. I'll be reading more.

[Fanciful Goddess]

AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL!!! I love it!!! great inspiring poem!