Hunt Me, Hurt Me.

A Book by RedRozeNinja13

Vivian Verona Singer, or "V", is from a long line of monster hunters. For her entire existence, she thought she knew all there was to life. Hunt. Survive. Protect. But what happens when that changes?

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© 2013 RedRozeNinja13

Author's Note

Based off of the show 'Supernatural' as a fan fiction of sorts, but I've changed the story line and everything about it so much that it's more like my own story. Even so I'll probably rewrite it until it doesn't resemble the show at all. You don't have to have watched the show to enjoy it. This is it's own story. Any feedback will be appreciated ^ ^. Pardon any typos, ect.

My Review

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Mittens

I've been working my way through this one for a few weeks now (Eye of the Slayer is up next, but I still have two more chapters here). I've never even seen an episode of Supernatural, but I've seen a number of other readers mention it in comments, so on the plus side you get a neutral review.

The prologue does a great job of establishing V as a character. In comparison to the other work of yours I've read, 'Stranger Things Have Happened', and this one has a more 'grown up" feel to it. It shows a progression in your writing and an ability to handle a more diverse set of stories and circumstances.

What I really love about your writing are things like the 'little gems' that you leave for people to discover, like the little Japanese phrases (I speak a bit of the language, so I was delighted to come across that) and few little nerd references that reward readers who share your taste in genres. The ability to pay homage to those who came before is the mark of a great writer.

One bit of advice in regards to this: I know it's written in first person, but one thing I always stress is that the devil is in the details. I think I may have offered the same advice in 'Stranger Things Have Happened'. You have a great focus on the events and the flow of the story, but details on things like environment and characters can be a little scant. For example, Clayton's got an eye-patch, but what else makes him distinctive? We get a better sense of him in the prologue as a kid, but very little about modern Clayton. What do Jayce and Dean even look like? More importantly, what's V's house like? Got a great description of her truck, but not much on the house. Keep in mind, this is by no means a detractor; the story is still excellent, I just think some polish would make it even better.

Keep up the fantastic writing; 'Eye of the Slayer' is next on the list as soon as I'm through this one. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

The prologue does a great job of establishing V as a character. In comparison to the other work of yours I've read, 'Stranger Things Have Happened', and this one has a more 'grown up" feel to it. It shows a progression in your writing and an ability to handle a more diverse set of stories and circumstances.

What I really love about your writing are things like the 'little gems' that you leave for people to discover, like the little Japanese phrases (I speak a bit of the language, so I was delighted to come across that) and few little nerd references that reward readers who share your taste in genres. The ability to pay homage to those who came before is the mark of a great writer.

One bit of advice in regards to this: I know it's written in first person, but one thing I always stress is that the devil is in the details. I think I may have offered the same advice in 'Stranger Things Have Happened'. You have a great focus on the events and the flow of the story, but details on things like environment and characters can be a little scant. For example, Clayton's got an eye-patch, but what else makes him distinctive? We get a better sense of him in the prologue as a kid, but very little about modern Clayton. What do Jayce and Dean even look like? More importantly, what's V's house like? Got a great description of her truck, but not much on the house. Keep in mind, this is by no means a detractor; the story is still excellent, I just think some polish would make it even better.

Keep up the fantastic writing; 'Eye of the Slayer' is next on the list as soon as I'm through this one. :)

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11 Years Ago

I'm so sorry for taking such a long time to reply! I certainly do enjoy your reviews, and "Eye pf t.. read more

11 Years Ago

Ha ha ha, Red, did you not notice how long it took me to get to the read request? It took me way lon.. read more

11 Years Ago

Well, I've started taking up short stories (They've always been a very weak point for me, to writ.. read more

Catherine Frain

I soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo LUVE V. She has a very awesome attitude, and she doesn't care what everyone thinks~ Love V and her story

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on September 26, 2013
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Tags: drama, fantasy, humor, science fiction, romance, supernatural, suspense, monster hunting

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RedRozeNinja13

Columbia, SC

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