Interaction with Nature

So this an extract from my Novel, which I haven't named it yet. So tell me if u like it. This novel is all about self analysis and self love.. So here it is-

It was just the time for sunrise... I was walking on the beach. The wind was fresh, with the tincture of flowers' beautiful sweet smelling fragrance. The wind was flowing and my face can feel the soft gust. It seemed like the most beautiful morning of the spring. With flowers blooming and as if they are smiling to me. Every biotic and abiotic factor looking at me. Smiling at me. As if they are saying something to me. But I could not hear them.My mind was preoccupied with my own thoughts. But I had the urge to drive every single thought out of my mind. My mind was struggling to drive the thought. Soon after few minutes I was successful. With every inch(?)  of wind flowing through my face, my ears could hear,'We love you'. Every particle saying,' I love you.' The chorus  pleased my mind. It was the best feeling in my life. A very supernatural feeling. A feeling which takes you ona tour to Heaven and back to Earth. With every single step I took on the sand, every particle said,'I love you.' I glanced at the bushes nearby.Every flower, every leaf and every thorn, saying to me,'I love you.', smilingly. Each hair of my body, each cell of my body felt rejuvenated. Refreshed....My muscles curled in a smile. As life came back to me. I was the happiest person on the Earth. And luckiest too. As I looked the sky, the first rays of the sun,'Ahana', met my eyes. It was smiling, as if it said,'I love you.' I looked at the birds. They were flying in their own happiness, in their own joy. But for a moment I saw them looking at me. I saw their beaks moving as I f they are saying,'I love you'. The chirps made by them said,'I love you'. As what my brain interpreted.  I saw the sun, taking over the dark night. The red wining over the blue. The morning sun was smiling. It said ,'I love you'. And that was the moment when I realized I have to love myself.

Author's Note

Just see the natural beauty. Thank you. And do tell me if you all like it.

Reviews

[Utkarsh Singh]

satyabhan ji i liked ur story very much ..........the way u wrote it is awesome ......
there is only one spelling mistake in second last line of ur story
"wining" what i think it should be "winning".plz check it out ........apart from this every thing is perfect ......its a beautiful story ....and one thing more i wanna read ur novel ......m in love with this extract .....

[Satyabhan Singh]

Thank you so much Mr. Utkarsh!! Yeah !! :) :) I will do the corrections