Autumnal Reflections

I want a rainy day and a cozy room with you and me inside.
A long soothing kiss by the fire in contrast to the explosive sounds outside.
That day would change definitions. Rain would mean cozy warm, thunder kiss.

Reviews

[Daniel Sala]

This conveys such a simple yet hard thing to find sometimes, besides love and affection, that what is become a better thing.

[Sajjad Panahian]

Thank you for your comment, Daniel. But I would like to add that simple things are generally taken for granted, and they are not something that are hard to find, but something that we gradually lose while we are completely unaware of their presence.

[Daniel Sala]

Thank you, Satch, what a marvellously true correction you have made, your definition is both brilliant and beautiful.

[Blue Winter]

I love this poem, it is true and beautiful in it''s simplicity :)

[Sajjad Panahian]

Happy to hear that, StarChild. Yes, It is simple, as is my love for the girl for whom I have written this poem!

[Blue Winter]

That's so lovely that you wrote a poem for her, I wrote a poem for my boyfriend about a year ago :)

[Sajjad Panahian]

That's the beauty of love which inspires to do something for your love, and what's better than the words that come from your heart?!

[Blue Winter]

Exactly