Remnants of Symphony

A somewhat personal poem, that i'm working on developing into a song.

Strong Notes of Imagery
Dance past my Ears
A Love Recovery
Beautifully Appears.
Cherish Crystal Remnants
Kiss each flickered shape till it Shines
Receive the shape of Crescents
In Return of Fine Lines.
Fill with Remnant Quotes
Drink the Deep Sound
Then Sing till it all Floats
And Wait Till They Surround.
Power your Steps with Sweet Ice
Hold Onto the Moonlit Night
Then Shift Around, Dance, Entice.
Resplendent, Unrestrained
Brilliant Hues of Intensity
Within Time it Drains
To My Remnants of Symphony.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[ThisLullaby]

i read this twice to gain full meaning, this is definitely a unique approach to the topic. your remnants of symphony... how interesting, it kind of simmers in my mind, like it's powerful, yet im not quite sure what message im supposed to get.

understanding the profound sense of pain that a recovery from love is, sometimes it can be difficult. my favorite time during this was when you explained crystal remnants. well done!

[Roland Petrov]

Beautiful notes that take on a life of their own. It reminds me of a song I used to sing, but I forgot it.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

This porm really caught my eye and my heart. Great Work!