Wandering tears

i enjoyed writing this. i mainly wrote it for myself

I wander beyond
what's hurting my heart
tears falling down
severing my bond
In words so tart
My wandering tears fall to the ground

In pain and agony
I can't run fast enough
I get caught again
And the process repeats
As my heart cries
My wandering tears fall to the ground

I feel as if i'm running in circles
And crying to noone
I try and try again
yet my tears won't stop falling
i think i might love and
My wandering tears fall to the ground

It hurts too much
To keep this love up
my heart hasn't broken
it's shattered into peices
I can't let it go
The love just wont go
My wandering tears fall to the ground

I stain my cheeks
with a darkness so clear
and i cant run far
not from here
I imagine the hurt of others
and i feel so bad
As my wandering tears fall to the ground

But as i think about all theses things
I remember the good and bad
what i remember
and what i've forgotten
I feel the old love
still tapping me on the heart
But i couldnt do it
Not anymore or anytime
I couldnt do it with the pain
That still lurks in my heart
And i think about it
As my wandering tears fall to the ground

Author's Note

critique, once again is greatly appreciated ^^

Reviews

[Momo Shikiro]

tis very heart felt, i can feel it. its very imaginative and i love it!