My Birds of Paradise

Just a result from emotional inspiration from a documentary on birds.

The Bird of Grief,
Sings for my sorrow.

The Bird of Hope,
Sings for the 'morrow.

The Bird of Joy,
Sings for my smile.

The Bird of Love,
Sings all the while.

The Bird of Peace,
Sings for my mind.

My Birds of Paradise,
For me to find.

Author's Note

Just some inspiration. I don't know how people will take it, but I thought it turned out fairly decent. :)

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Oh the wondrous birds there are for us behold. Well done!

I would suggest to put a dash in the last couplet, given the "Bird of Paradise" doesn't seem to sing, for it's not quite found yet. Adds a bit of power with the dash. Just a thought.

[Tina Kline]

This is a really really great poem! Very clever, impressive and well done.
I really do love this!!

[Katie Lynn]

Thank you :-)

[Tate Morgan]

That was truly inspirational

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and lovely.
Much enjoyed